Congratulations, Ali - this is a really good story! We were very impressed with the varying verbs that you used, as well as the interesting adverbs, and we thought that your punctuation was excellent! The ending was very satisfying, as these clever girls returned to their game of long multiplication. Well done, Ali, we enjoyed this!
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Congratulations, Ali - this is a really good story! We were very impressed with the varying verbs that you used, as well as the interesting adverbs, and we thought that your punctuation was excellent!
The ending was very satisfying, as these clever girls returned to their game of long multiplication.
Well done, Ali, we enjoyed this!
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